Where Birds No Longer Sing
She wears scarlet rosesOver a leather vestThe modern princessShe was once the dreamerA world all to herselfYet open to everyone elseThen one night She waited for himWith a candled dinnerIn the scarlet...
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Marc,Wow, I haven't read anything from you in a long time, and this definitely reminds me of your ability to constantly write wonderful poems... This is particularly heartbreaking, especially when I...
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Marc,This was beautiful...though sad!!! It was so uniquely written from the title to the very last line and it was written with imagery that kept me reading! It was so sad when it turned out that this...
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marc ... a truly sad and moving story told here ... such sorrow as she realizes she has truly been abandoned by the one she loves ... and decides that alone is no way to live ... powerful and very...
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Wow, Marc, this is heartbreaking, sad, and very beautiful.Had me there with every word, I really loved this.Beautifully written.Mystic~Mystic~"I, like a rock, sink, Sinking til I hit the bottom, The...
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Marc...good to see you again...wherever the juice was hiding, it's back...this is great...a tale of love...and love lost, betrayed...and the ultimate price paid for that betrayal...excellent writing!...
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Wow Marc, what are you talkin' about, the juice never left!This is an intense read, mercy! Very well done, really plays with the emotions big time! Sad but beautiful, much enjoyed!peace!--Mike
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Hi Marc, this is a sad tale of love lost. Great images, the reader can see the story as it unfolds. Nicely done! Good to see you again.Karen
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So very sad,,,,accepting sorrow, like theres no hope for the future, nowhere to run, so she stays,,,It takes alot of courage to walk away from anything, even something loveless.Patricia**See...
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Thanks everyone for reading and commenting, much appreciated!
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